Sela Locke

I'm gonna keep this short, one, because I don't like to nitpick, and two, because I... don't have a lot to say. xD Now, the vampire romances in general? I ...

If this were the first chapter, I would certainly follow your advice on the first paragraph, but it isn't. Other than that, thanks for the review. Any and all reviews ...

Huh. I don't nitpick s'much, so I'm just gonna look it over and give you my impressions, a'right? A'right. Like Mr. Sureal said, the purple prose is - well, let's ...

“No more than two weeks later,” Allen sighed, stepping back inside from yet another successful arrest. “As the crow flies,” he added, for no reason in particular. Or rather, he ...

Thanks! Yeah, I'll have to look it over - I was pretty tired when I wrote it. xD -SELA

but know that this is a poor poem (it's just my opinion, but after all, opinions are why you posted this here in the first place) that shows you don't ...

Well, thank you all! I edited it, to the best of my ability. Perhaps you could tell me what you think? I might put the next part on tomorrow. Toodle-oo! ...

Ahh, thank goodness, my favorite old man! And thank you, Prok, for not sparing me - I felt the same, to be honest. I'm not all that good at short ...

Something I just wrote on impulse. Don't be nice. PG-13 for tiny bits o' language. * Allen watched passively as a girl, no older than seventeen or eighteen, was helped ...

Stephenie Meyer is not a good author. The characters are useless and cliche, the plot line is sickeningly cheesy, and the dialogue could be written by my five-year-old brother. Okay, ...

I like it. I like it. I liiiike it. Oh, two mistakes. You put 'one's' instead of 'ones'. And something else that I forgot. Besides, Mr.-everyone-hates-me-and-I'm-a-fake-chiropractor's voice is distrac

Hai! Sela here, to review your 'pathetic love story', so called. =D First and foremost, let's not make the name of our stories self-deprecation for lack of better titles, yes? ...

Just writing. Being in the middle of climax towards something the main character doesn't understand, and having him/her agonize over what could possibly happen, and then, just as it's too ...

Well, obviously there are pessimistic people out there, and I'm not saying he's a bad character - just that, unless you were hoping we'd despise the guy, you could perhaps ...

Thanks, y'all, for reviewing. It's nice to get replies, but I'm not really looking for critiques. This was just something to get my annoyance over the lame Twilight books out ...